The development of weapons in Ancient Greece has evolved alongside changing fighting tactics and formations. These weapons have adapted in order to be most effective in the current fighting structure. Greek social structure highly influenced whether the value is placed on the individual in a fighting force or the fighting force as a whole. Individual and group combat have different fighting tactics that result in different weapons and uses. Offensive weapons are most effective in individual combat but defensive measures are favored in fighting with a group. Shields, armor, spears, and swords have developed throughout Ancient Greek history depending on changing military tactics.

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  1. 1. First sentence could be a bit more engaging. It came off as a little bland. You want to have a strong opening to entice the reader right off that.

    2. Sentences 2 and 3 felt disconnected. You should switch around the order of sentences or connect the idea of Greek social structure and formation a little more effectively with the adaptation of weapons.

    3. The ending felt solid. You recapped the idea, and It looks like it will be an effective movement into the next paragraph of your paper.

    Overall good introduction, just needs a little more flow to it, as well as a more catchy beginning.

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